tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3222668886287317656.post6107926562391008635..comments2023-04-05T01:42:31.885-07:00Comments on Cassie Grace Art and Illustration: The White StagCassiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04786487811608448238noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3222668886287317656.post-45208837981033866662012-05-19T19:39:55.221-07:002012-05-19T19:39:55.221-07:00Thank you guys for the great critiques!!! Emily yo...Thank you guys for the great critiques!!! Emily you are right about that panel.... but I don't wanna!! But your so right. I'll have to redo it.Cassiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04786487811608448238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3222668886287317656.post-45187763171799750242012-05-19T11:34:14.459-07:002012-05-19T11:34:14.459-07:00Wow Cassie! This is so exciting. I can't wai...Wow Cassie! This is so exciting. I can't wait to see more. I like your character with dark hair better. It seems like it'll be very tricky to keep the highest contrast where you want it working with greyscale and the strength of ink lines. I also wanted to comment on how well developed your self critique is. Way to go!Shara Millshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11670283177668630254noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3222668886287317656.post-66630728831343049202012-05-18T09:07:25.880-07:002012-05-18T09:07:25.880-07:00What a fun project! My first critique was to the s...What a fun project! My first critique was to the stag- the whole style of it is so crisp and clean and he looks a little unkempt instead of wild and lovely. Tough thing to portray... I would recommend taking out the describing lines that show his "effort" on his face and make the curls more deliberate and designed. I think he should be regal and a bit anonymous. <br />I like the 1,2,3,4 across layout better. It made more sense to me. <br />And I hate to say it, but when I read "White Stag" I thought of Harry Potter...<br />Maybe on panel 9 you could have it more zoomed in on her and what she's doing and only show part of the stag. I think it will help with the "surprise". <br />There's my two-cents. Hope that helps!Emily Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00424228180425000934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3222668886287317656.post-25005642649811045782012-05-18T08:28:37.075-07:002012-05-18T08:28:37.075-07:00Woooo!! Go Cas! This is going to be a great finish...Woooo!! Go Cas! This is going to be a great finished product! Let's make a mini website for it once it's finished! You finish it and I'll build it. It will be awesome! : )Mike Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07467847534280343133noreply@blogger.com